Monday, January 6, 2014

This Day, That Night!

This post has been published by me as a part of the Blog-a-Ton 45; the forty-fifth edition of the online marathon of Bloggers; where we decide and we write. To be part of the next edition, visit and start following Blog-a-Ton.
Behind those smiles
hid those feelings,
the truth that
stay unlocked
in the mysteries
of the storm
that lay
unchased
where in the
midst of that
mighty mist,
there I felt
the gist
of your presence
captured
in those
clear lenses,
where the fierce
nature's storm
blew off
the shelter
that took away
our felicity
and the blitheness
forever since.
Alas,
let the nature
create those
illusions,
for my love
for you
is
eternal.

- Nandini

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18 comments:

  1. Love is indeed eternal. Sadly the meaning of love has been lost somewhere between flings and other stuff. Beautiful words Nandini. :)

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    1. Thanks for those beautiful words of praise, Harshal! :)

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  2. Very beautiful Nabanita....! I loved it.

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    1. Khushi, Nandini here! :) and many thanks! :)

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  3. Very beautiful Nabanita.... So beautifully written.

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  4. Well written.
    However, the color of the text (red), made it difficult for me to read - especially because of the black background. See if you could change the combination. A request.

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  5. Those illusions which are near to impossible...
    A very touching composition.

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  6. Nice poem Nandini. All the best for BAT :)

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